Planning- Opening scene narration-Miss B

When we decided that we finials our narration we wrote down a clear structure on how the film will officially be like, as without a clear structure the audience will not understand the story line and wouldn't want too continue watching the film.

Start: A women who is pregnant (3-5 months) is going through a difficult stage as she is mentally disturbed. There is a professor who is observing her mental state as she is jumping about, clutching her stomach crying, laughing and screaming. The professor  notice that her behavior is getting worse and worse as she screams. The setting will be in a white room which represents her innocents and also could mean she is a victim of something bad. the costume of the pregnant women is she will be wearing white dress which could also represent that she is innocent and her being in a mental hospital.

Middle: When the women behavior starts getting worse she starts seeing flashbacks of her pregnancy. The first flashback was her finding out the pregnancy and was in a very happy situation and is with the baby father as she holds her tummy. The second flashback is the man who is in a relationship with the pregnant women sees her boy-friend/ husband kissing another women and is very upset/jealous. The last flashback is that the pregnant women kills the women who was involved with the cheating. The reason why she killed the women was because she didn't want anything interfering with her relationship with the man. In each flash the pregnant women knows she has done a bad things and contains screaming and crying.

End: When the flashback ends the pregnant women sees the doors open and becomes scared. The women goes crawl in the corner in pain and sees this women who looks pale and is dressed in white. She starts behaving weird again and looks at something as the professor is unable to understand what's going on. The pregnant women realizes that's the women she killed because of the jealousy that token over. The women who is a ghost comes closer and closer. As she comes closer the pregnant women belly starts moving and you can see the . The professor is still confused about it as he looks at the laptop monitor. The ghost hands reaches out to he belly and the pregnant belly is shown, you can see the baby's hand is shown moving and the pregnant women screams.

Structure: This is a good start, middle and ending as the ending has a cliff-hanger. The cliff-hanger will leave the audience wanting to know what happened and be able to watch it. The audience response will be curiosity of what is going to happen next as it is building tension. The audience will have sympathy for the characters mainly for the pregnant women. The audience will also why the baby hands are almost coming out.